New Song

So I felt like working on some music today and so I decided to pull a song out of the archive that my buddy Jonathan May wrote. I put some lyrics to it and started recording the vocals today, I still need to do some tweeking but this is what I've got so far.



I've fallen again, by the deceit in your eyes
Struck by the sin, that grows through your eyes
You've reach out your hand for me to take
Whisper your lies, telling me it's safe

You've lied to me more than a time or two
But still I trust in the things you do
You spin me around, break my knees
Drag me down, and take the keys

Chorus
You break..... me down
Down so far, I can't feel my pain
You break... me down
I can't lift my head, Father, send your rain

I need some hope, through your blood I'm alive
Some way to cope, not another to disguise
You reach out your hand for me to take
Its through your mercy I enter your grace

I need your rain to clense me now
To wash this pain, to make me bow
On my knees you lifted my head
Took this disease, and gave me bread

Chorus
Chorus
You break..... me down
Down so far, I can't feel my pain
You break... me down
I can't lift my head, Father, send your rain

Bridge
Take a look around me
This is where your found me
Send down your rain
Send down your rain
REPEAT

CHORUS

I'm kind of surprised I wrote this honestly. For me it was kind of a retrospective look on how I've lived, made stupid choices, fallen away from God. I think we have all felt this way more than once in our lives! Suggestions are welcome.